Monday 22 September 2008

Autumn in the Air

My day was very tiring, and so I'll leave you with a poem instead. I wrote it a few days ago, I think - late at night when the wind was dancing with the trees. (Yes, I am in love with Autumn.)

Cold inclosing me
In a chill embrace
Wind scattering
My thoughts like the
Wandering lost leaves
As the days go on
I begin to see
Autumn hanging frost
In the Air.

3 comments:

  1. "As the days go on
    I begin to see
    Autumn hanging frost
    In the air"

    Squeee! *good shivers* I /love/ those last four lines.

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  2. Love it! Oooo...spooky! In a good way, though. Autumn is beautiful!

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  3. I was going to quote my favorite bit, but andromanche beat me to it. Anyways, I love that bit.

    My only quibble is about whether 'incloses' is a word or not . . . 'encloses' is the proper word, I think?

    Thanks for sharing your bit of autumn with me, though, since autumn down here isn't much like autumn at all!

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